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:icongrungetv:
Sort of a minimalist 3D abstract which I've also released as a wallpaper pack here: [link]

Comments and crits more than welcome!

C4D and Photoshop.

*EDIT: I reworked this image here: [link]
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Critique by *lotus2133 Mar 15, 2010, 8:32:36 PM
First of all, I would like to say that I think this is a really great form that you've made here. The play on light and shadow are both fantastic as is the use of color. You're clearly proficient with making digital three-dimensional forms.

The few problems that I have with this piece come not from the technique; I think you've got that covered quite well. Rather, I question your choice of colors and the choice of the background. I don't think that the background does any favors for this form. This form has so much going on in the interior track that I want to be looking at, but the lines are continually pulling my eye away from that. I would love to see this same piece without the distracting background. A solid perhaps? I'm not sure, but the current background really detracts from the continuity of the form for me.

As for the color choice, I think you've done well in selecting your red, but I would reconsider the yellow. It's a little jarring and stark in this context.

Overall though, good work. I like it.
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~danielkrull Mar 16, 2010
Nice render!

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*GrungeTV Mar 16, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
I'm in the process of remaking it tho! Improving the colours and getting rid of the diagonal lines!!

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:icondischarged:
~Discharged Mar 15, 2010
Wish you didn't put the lines in....really spoils it :(

Otherwise, I really like the minimalistic approach and the render itself :) Good job :D

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*GrungeTV Mar 16, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks mate! I appreciate your honesty!

The lines have been mentioned in the crit left by *lotus2133 so I think they should perhaps be removed/replaced!

Glad you like the rest of it tho! :D

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Mood: Joy ~antichrist01 Mar 15, 2010
fantastic shapes, material and render!
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*GrungeTV Mar 16, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! :)

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~encoretheangel Mar 15, 2010
wooow, great work man! the shapes make me maaaadd... :omg:

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*GrungeTV Mar 16, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks mate! :D

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~encoretheangel Mar 16, 2010
you're very welcome!! :ahoy:

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=k3-studio Mar 15, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Nice render. ^^
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